The endless re-writes

Hi, here it is, The Book.

I'm re-writing again, based on the advice I had from the agent who wrote last week. You see if I remove Stefan Maric's back-story from the prologue (which incidently I do think is a good idea because we don't hear very much more about him, except his re-occurring name, until half to two-thirds of the way through the book) I still have to include it somewhere and I don't want to just shove it in somewhere else. I think it needs to be sprinkled about a bit, and unfortunately sprinkling is a great deal more time-consuming than shoving.

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