Sunday, July 01, 2007

92,070 Words

I've finished the re-write and given it to my mum with instructions to be brutally honest. In particular, I wanted to know:

  • Is it always clear who's speaking to whom?
  • Are there any continuity errors or parts of the plot that otherwise make no sense?
  • Are there passages that digress too far from the story and ought to be cut?
  • Is it all just too depressing?

I'll post her verdict in full.


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